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2011年河北省中考英语作文试题及解析

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  试题解析:

  提纲式作文;要求以Life is Full of Sunshine为题写一篇短文,你的观点是生活中充满阳光,因此在第一段要明确观点,用第一人称单数形式。根据提示,可使用in my opinion这个短语,表达我的观点是。。。在举例论述观点时注意时间是几周前,因此第二段要使用一般过去时态。最后一段用一两句话总结,点明主旨,明确中心思想。提建议时可用should, had better等词。注意使用提示词be too poor to afford,take out our pocket money等。

  作文范文:

  Sunshine in My Life    Everyone has different ideas about life.Some say life is happy, while others feel life is unhappy.In my opinion, life is beautiful and full of sunshine.    Several weeks ago, one of my classmates Sun was badly ill.He had to be in hospital for a long time.But his family was too poor to afford it.We decided to collect money for him.Everyone in our class took out our pocket money.Then, we went to the street on Sunday to collect money from others.When we sent all the money to him, he and his parents were deeply moved.    Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky, but we should believe life is beautiful.Help and love will be around us forever.

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